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Okay, here we go, my first attempt at posting my pencils...eeek! Yeah...Angelique helped me figure the silly process out! I am sooooo computer illiterate!

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Nice! You did really well with the hands - those are always hard to do, as I understand it. But, where were Nightcrawler's swords in the first one :?
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Thank you, Chicory! When I started that one, I decided to add Kassandra for Angelique in the Background, because I promised her a pic of Kassi, so Kurt didn't get a sword, but the Zeitgeist did! Added the ship in the background as an afterthought as well. I have since touched up things that buggered me like heavier shading around the eyes and Kassi's jawline! (A friend of mine graded them as verygood, and suggested I practice a tad on foreshortening, and try inking them using copies!) Had been a commercial art major at one time! Angelique wanted me to post them...so...
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Extra one to add:

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Was looking forward to seeing you post that one!
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Yikes! Good job on the details though - and the contour lines are really well done too! Very nice :)
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Chicory? Oh, Angel! I worked on this all alone in the van while I was watching the firesite. I am so afraid to ink!

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f320/ ... 2021Pt.jpg




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Post by NachtcGleiskette »

Star, we have a rule about uploading pictures over 40 kb to the site. But you can upload that picture to your Photobucket account and either link it or use the [img] tags to post it here ;)
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Star, make lots of photocopies! Then you won't destroy your original and you'll have plenty to practice with. (I'd be afraid too! When you make mistakes with ink you can't go back :eek)
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Thank you, Nacht!! I appreciate it! Will change the size or drop it in the photobucket!! Has been corrected and resubmitted using the "bucket"...see above!!

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The first picture of Kurt and Kassi is good, and the last one too, but I particularly liked the second picture. Flight is so difficult to capture, and I think you did it extremely well. Fantastic!! :D
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Post by StarChild »

Okay, let's see if you like this one...or this one...(had a scanner prob on that one! ehhhh! :shrug)








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Second one with the scanner issue:

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The muscles and shading are very good. Maybe the tail should be a little longer though? I like the posture - the angle of him kneeling like that is ususual, so it makes the pic more interesting. Good job Starchild!
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Liked them all. Especially the Rescue. You draw his facial expressions well, I think.
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Okay...referenced John Byrne's art work last night while working...check 'em out!!





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And the last one!!





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I liked the face on the teleport one. You do a good job with the shading, I could never figure out how to do that realistically. But, it really brings out the muscles on the face. :)
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The Knightcrawler?? Going to write a story based on this one! Kraggarot is half dragon and half human!

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f320/ ... ggarot.jpg

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Post by Angelique »

Like that. And it looks better magnified! (But half dragon, half human? How is that even remotely possible?)
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Post by StarChild »

He was a very, very big test tube baby...:D

Going to have to read the story aren't you?? :read

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I guess so! :D
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Post by StarChild »

Angelique!!! Look what Vlad did to Kurt in the other forum!! LOOK!!!

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f320/ ... _KurtV.jpg


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