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Shadowscrawl
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Post by Shadowscrawl »

Okay, I just read the rules and it doesn't say anywhere "no comics". So...

NOT humour. PG for violence and other.

http://www.webcomicsnation.com/nagar/fates/series.php

I'm of two minds about this. It's very much a work in progress. On the one hand I would like people to only see it when it is perfect, on the other hand how can I make it better if no one sees it?

I welcome criticism. :/
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Zuno
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Post by Zuno »

Wow, this story looks very exiting!
I read what you have so far from the beginning to the end.
Don't have any critique at the moment thou.
The story is very interesting, and told in a way thats easy to follow without any unnecesary long dialogs.
Id love to see more =)

Oh, and the man, Michel, kinda reminds me of a human version of Nighty (and just as handsome too =D )
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English being my second language + dyslexsia = lotts of them XD
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