Juat a little pic of Kurt in the circus: My Handsome Demon
I hope you guys like it =^_^=
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I apolagise for my spelling mistakes.
English being my second language + dyslexsia = lotts of them XD
I apolagise for my spelling mistakes.
English being my second language + dyslexsia = lotts of them XD
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Nice try.
I can really say I like the shading on his left leg.
Unfortunately I'm a bit too nice to say anything else.
But if you really want critiques you should say so.
Keep on practicing.
I can really say I like the shading on his left leg.
Unfortunately I'm a bit too nice to say anything else.
But if you really want critiques you should say so.
Keep on practicing.
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As shown on Deviant art, on the commenting box:
"Advanced Critique Encouraged
This user has opted to encourage critique-heavy comments for this deviation in order to better help him or her improve. Critical and non-critical comments are welcome, but critical comments are most appreciated"
So, if you have some critique I would love to hear it, so I can improve =^_^=
"Advanced Critique Encouraged
This user has opted to encourage critique-heavy comments for this deviation in order to better help him or her improve. Critical and non-critical comments are welcome, but critical comments are most appreciated"
So, if you have some critique I would love to hear it, so I can improve =^_^=
Please visit my art side: http://the-shadowcat.deviantart.com/
I apolagise for my spelling mistakes.
English being my second language + dyslexsia = lotts of them XD
I apolagise for my spelling mistakes.
English being my second language + dyslexsia = lotts of them XD
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Righto then. I'm not really an artist so I can't give a lot of tips but it looks like you have a good start. It looks massively airbrushed, at least on my monitor; you may want to consider a pencil/Bezier curve outline and then just shading the inside with solid colours.
The anatomy's pretty good though the breast is a bit... (saggy?) and the eyes look a trifle unreal. I think that this is indeed a good start and I hope to see more of your pictures as you develop.
The anatomy's pretty good though the breast is a bit... (saggy?) and the eyes look a trifle unreal. I think that this is indeed a good start and I hope to see more of your pictures as you develop.
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I'm no artist, but dang! I can cook on those abs! Nice!:pant
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I would agree with hm's first assessment of the pecs - because of the shading being a little dramatic (very high contrast), they appear breastlike at first glance. And as with anything, the only way to get better is to keep on going, so keep it up .
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I really enjoy it...comming from one artist to another. Sadly here is some positive critsism: The red shorts is too bright..tone it down..blend it, his tail no propotional and if ya want him a costume..go all out...no shorts. I love it though. Very talented, keep at it!!!!:chatty
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