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Post by silvermouse »

I have one Kurt story, very short, but I was hoping to get opinions of it. The link is here, and I will warn you now, the writing is purple on black. Thanks!
"We don't need another hero, we don't need to know the way home. All we want is life beyond the thunderdome." "Words fail, buildings tumble, the ground opens wide. Light beams down from heaven, she stands before my eyes. She's actual size but she seems much bigger to me."
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Post by ahmed »

Bogartesque...
"Earthwormearthwormearthwormearthworm Jim! Hoo-ray for him!!!"

"Eat Dirt, evildoer!!!!!"

"By The Great Worm, whose segments stretch across the infinite universe."

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Wow, I'm ignorant...explain Bogartesque, please?
"We don't need another hero, we don't need to know the way home. All we want is life beyond the thunderdome." "Words fail, buildings tumble, the ground opens wide. Light beams down from heaven, she stands before my eyes. She's actual size but she seems much bigger to me."
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Post by ahmed »

I think Humphry Bogart was a famous mystery scriptwriter who wrote those stories with the shadowed detective theme. He's got a very distinctive style of writing...
"Earthwormearthwormearthwormearthworm Jim! Hoo-ray for him!!!"

"Eat Dirt, evildoer!!!!!"

"By The Great Worm, whose segments stretch across the infinite universe."

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oh! Thank you for the enlightenment. And for the opinion.
"We don't need another hero, we don't need to know the way home. All we want is life beyond the thunderdome." "Words fail, buildings tumble, the ground opens wide. Light beams down from heaven, she stands before my eyes. She's actual size but she seems much bigger to me."
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Post by kurtlover »

nice story! do you have more?
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not yet, but soon. I hope. Heh. The difficulty is that I write it out in notebooks, and am lazy enough not to type them up.
"We don't need another hero, we don't need to know the way home. All we want is life beyond the thunderdome." "Words fail, buildings tumble, the ground opens wide. Light beams down from heaven, she stands before my eyes. She's actual size but she seems much bigger to me."
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Post by little Blue Lucy »

Wow!:eek: That is one short fic! It's great though anyway!:D Why does everyone run from Nighty?:( He was helping! I would run up and hug him and be like oh thank you! My hero! I'm different though I guess.:P:laugh:
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I think Humphry Bogart was a famous mystery scriptwriter who wrote those stories with the shadowed detective theme. He's got a very distinctive style of writing...
I thought Bogart was a famous actor?:?
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I would hug him too. But not everyone would. If someone ran into a guy who looked like a demon IRL, they would freak. Heck, I adore Nighty, but if I ran into him in real life, it would give me pause. What would it do to someone who never even saw him in the book? Or at least that was my idea.
"We don't need another hero, we don't need to know the way home. All we want is life beyond the thunderdome." "Words fail, buildings tumble, the ground opens wide. Light beams down from heaven, she stands before my eyes. She's actual size but she seems much bigger to me."
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Post by jogurt »

A wonderful story.
Sad.
WHY?
Why is it always like this...why do we scare what different. Who formed our picture of what "demonlike", what s ugly?
The real bad guys in our world are definitive not covered in blue fur...
Why we don´t fraid them?
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Post by Ult_Sm86 »

probably 'cause of the bible. No offnese to nighty, but, even in god's eyes, just being born was a sin, then he joined x-men, and killed his half brother. ( THe grapes of WRATH, anyone read it?)
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Post by silvermouse »

well, that also depends on your interpretation of the gible...which is what I won't get into here! But in "A demon went to mass" (church?) he confessed to the sin of being a mutant and was pardoned, or rather, told it wasn't a sin, wasn't he?
"We don't need another hero, we don't need to know the way home. All we want is life beyond the thunderdome." "Words fail, buildings tumble, the ground opens wide. Light beams down from heaven, she stands before my eyes. She's actual size but she seems much bigger to me."
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Hello all of you...
Bamfman:
He wasn´t his halfbroth He was his stepbrother!
He had real god reasons and he only wanted to talk it was in the heat of the mom.
It was before he joined the Xguys!
It is never a sin to be born!
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Post by little Blue Lucy »

Totally true! Welcome to the board Mel (okay guess I won't have a nick for you either;) see introduce yourselves in off topic for further details)! Congrats you're the 100th member!:D *hands out noisemakers and blue streamers*
Vala: "Hello."
Daniel: "What the hell are you doing here?"
Vala: "Isn't this my room?"
Daniel: "Noooo… your room is across the hall… with the… guard in front of it."
Vala: "Ah yes, they do all rather look alike don't they? Anyhow, Since I'm here, shall we make the best of it?"
Daniel: "No, we shalln't."
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