Movie writing challenge entry "Fade" Warning:SAD

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Movie writing challenge entry "Fade" Warning:SAD

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Whats wrong with me...:?
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Kurt wondered what he had gotten himself into.

As he looked at his surrondings, he saw everything was... white.

He didnt get it. What was he doing here?

And then... it hit him.

The attack, the Purifiers, Kitty, the bullet.

Relivation dawned on him.

He was dead.

He felt his legs growing weaker, shaking, he collapsed on the ground. Or was it a floor? whatever it was, it was white. He fell onto it, sobbing. He coulent take it. It was to much.

One by one, the memorys invaded his head.
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"Oh, your not supposed to be alive..."

"Stefan-NO!!!"

CRRRRRRRRAAAAAACCCCCKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!
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"DEMON!"
"BABY KILLER!"
"KILL IT!"
"N-no! let me..."
"DEVILS SPAWN!"
"SHUT UP, MONSTER!"
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Kurt screamed, cluching his head.

It was happening all over again.

The memorys were flooding his head, fast, small, images that disapered as soon as they appered.
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"I would like to invite you to join the X-"

"C'mon elf, lets-"

"Elf? What are you-"

"Kurt? are you-"

"ELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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Kurt cluched his head, and ,slowly, the memorys ebbed away.

He was still in the white room. He was confused. Was this the afterlife, was this heven, or hell? Or some where in between?

Were would he be going?

Or would he stay here forever, as punishment?

Were his sinsthat unforgivable?

He stood up, and looked down, something was going on...

Oh, god.

It was his funeral.

He wached silently as his coffin was lowered into the ground...

He wached Kitty, sobbing on Logans sholder...

It was to much.

He couldnt take it anymore.

One final memory entered his head, and started to play, like a movie.
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The purifiers were attacking the manstion.

Kurt telaported from Purifer to Purifier, beating them up in any way possible.

He saw Kitty, phaseing through purifiers and giving them a run for their money. He smiled.

Then, he saw the gun.

He saw it aimed at Kitty. And before he knew it, he had telaported in front of Kitty, just as the trigger was pulled.

He felt pain, and everything faded to black.
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Kurt resurfaced from the memory, still in the white room.

Sill dead.

Sill stuck here.

He looked up...

And saw the gates of heaven before him. He felt himself drawn to them, something was..wrong.

Was it fate? Destiny? Would he come back? What would happen to his soul, would he be forgiven? Would he be met by anyone? Would they meet him their? The ones that he loved?

He felt himself fadeing, as he was drawn to the gates of Heven, or hell, he didnt know yet...

But what he did know, was that he was leaveing this life...

and heading for the next.
...PIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I apolgize for any spelling mistakes, Its kinda hard to type in a straitjacket...
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Movie writing challenge entry "Fade" Warning:SAD

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=D awesome!!!!!! Nice job getting it in before the deadline. Are you going to continue it or leave it like that? Either way, NICE job :)
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I might write a sequel someday... Thanks!
...PIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I apolgize for any spelling mistakes, Its kinda hard to type in a straitjacket...
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suspenseful.
"Humanity is a parade of fools, and I am at the front of it, twirling a baton." From Chapter 9 of _Brother Odd_ by Dean Koontz / from Chapter 10: "Life you can evade; death you cannot."

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Movie writing challenge entry "Fade" Warning:SAD

Post by BrittanyGritty »

I like that even though Kurt believes in God, and has alot in hope in faith.
Kurt was confused 'bout where he was going, where he was, and if he was staying.
I like that it kind of seems like he had doubt in what he believed.

Anyway, great writing, very sad.
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