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by John Doe
Fri Jun 24, 2005 7:21 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Even Angels have Scars -- Complete
Replies: 400
Views: 46162

Even Angels have Scars -- Complete

I have absolutely no idea how long this took me to read, but it bridged one of the dozens of gaps I've had in being here. Which means it's probably a few months, off and on, and honestly there was a long period of time that separates your story, at least for me, into two halves- right around the eve...
by John Doe
Wed Jun 08, 2005 2:55 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Until Death Do Us Part -- sequel to Even Angels Have Scars
Replies: 92
Views: 27389

Until Death Do Us Part -- sequel to Even Angels Have Scars

I remember you John. Do you plan to finish your story you were posting? Bloodmetal something... I couldn't remember the rest of the title. I'm glad you're enjoying Even Angels Have Scars. Please leave feedback in the thread if you have any. I know for a fact that there's a ton of grammatical mistak...
by John Doe
Mon Jun 06, 2005 4:29 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Until Death Do Us Part -- sequel to Even Angels Have Scars
Replies: 92
Views: 27389

Until Death Do Us Part -- sequel to Even Angels Have Scars

Originally posted by Rowena Kurt thought of James and Brin and all the others he would have liked to see and spend time with for a moment reconsidered. I think you're missing a word in there somewhere. I don't think she is, actually. Maybe a comma, though- it's a pretty snake-like thought. And as K...
by John Doe
Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:51 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Incredible Nightcrawler meets Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer (A Complete Fractured Christmas Tale)
Replies: 66
Views: 36571

The Incredible Nightcrawler meets Rudolph the Red-Nosed Rein

This seems like the kind of story that would be quite enjoyable to write. In large part, this was, as your stories usually are, awesome. The moral of the story was felt without being forced. Your characterization was excellent, and the characters themselves easy to relate to and "get along with". Ex...
by John Doe
Thu Jan 27, 2005 12:17 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Small Steps, Great Leaps (COMPLETE!!!)
Replies: 86
Views: 12213

Small Steps, Great Leaps (COMPLETE!!!)

Wow! Most of the stories written about Kurt's past are savagely* trite: They address the "deepest" parts of Kurt's past, the times heaviest laden with trauma and revelation- for example, I'd say the overwhelming majority address Kurt's discovery of his power before they even address his childhood ! ...
by John Doe
Sat Aug 07, 2004 12:43 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Bloodmetal Candidate (Prologue-Ch.9) (New Updates- Ch. 6, 7, 8, &9)
Replies: 20
Views: 1570

The Bloodmetal Candidate (Prologue-Ch.9) (New Updates- Ch. 6, 7, 8, &9)

As of Sunday, I'm gone two weeks for sleepaway camp. I know nobody cares that that means no updates on this.
by John Doe
Tue Aug 03, 2004 2:10 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Nightcrawler
Replies: 9
Views: 1502

The Nightcrawler

"A fool knows no fear. A hero shows no fear." -a quote found on 'Intrepid Hero', a Magic: The Gathering card. This reminded me of it. This sort of reminded me of those Native American stories where the young boy goes out hunting or on a 'vision quest', and as a reward is given a new name. Your descr...
by John Doe
Tue Aug 03, 2004 1:58 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: After the Good-Byes
Replies: 5
Views: 1246

After the Good-Byes

Ach! So you got the "Kurti" nickname from Internutter too! My favorite fanfic is still "Don't Pity Me", despite obscenity and graphic storytelling. I love when already great writers use innovative forms like this. Your range of ability is amazing. It only got confusing when there were three people o...
by John Doe
Tue Aug 03, 2004 1:42 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Reconciling Differences
Replies: 9
Views: 1522

Reconciling Differences

I forgot the challenge's details shortly after beginning to read the story, and then after I went back and looked at them and bowled over at how well you'd sewn them in! I hadn't even realized the obligation to use certain events until I read it again. Even without the challenge this was an incredib...
by John Doe
Tue Aug 03, 2004 1:20 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Das Tagebuch: A Complete Story (Evoverse)
Replies: 3
Views: 1022

Das Tagebuch: A Complete Story (Evoverse)

You cannot possibly have ended this story in this fashion. This is immeasuraly distressing! Your "one-shot" fics, as you describe them, are flawlessly charming! You are so remarkably adept at making your readers feel what you're writing. I know I did. I really like how Kitty actually addresses her D...
by John Doe
Mon Aug 02, 2004 6:51 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: An Early Morning Surprise (An Earth 723 Father's Day Fic)
Replies: 12
Views: 2732

An Early Morning Surprise (An Earth 723 Father's Day Fic)

This story is so remarkably charming. I enjoyed every bit of it. I especially loved Edmund's eggs: “Salt, pepper, oregano, basil, garlic powder, rosemary, cheddar cheese, sliced ham, Worstershire sauce, hot sauce, and I forget what else." I really love that he forgot what else. Such a kid thing to s...
by John Doe
Mon Aug 02, 2004 6:28 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Brimstone Of The Devil
Replies: 3
Views: 823

The Brimstone Of The Devil

Now I'm intrigued. So this has to do with his father? Niiice. I'll be around to see this one...good job so far. The one question I had is- who's Emma? A made-up character, I assume?

Can you check out my piece?
by John Doe
Sat Jul 31, 2004 2:28 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Bloodmetal Candidate (Prologue-Ch.9) (New Updates- Ch. 6, 7, 8, &9)
Replies: 20
Views: 1570

The Bloodmetal Candidate (Prologue-Ch.9) (New Updates- Ch. 6, 7, 8, &9)

@ the MLK thing: Oh, well, f&^# that! Grr. Every year in my uber-white little town when MLK day comes around/ Black History Month, they always say a bomb killed him. That ticks me off. Thanks for that- I'll change it... :growl: It doesn't ruin the analogy. Now he died in an instant when a bullet pie...
by John Doe
Wed Jul 28, 2004 9:20 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Brimstone Of The Devil
Replies: 3
Views: 823

The Brimstone Of The Devil

Hey, I dig this beginning. There were a few things wrong with it, though, other than the rather sporadic punctuation and spacing. First of all, "did you miss me?" is not a very novel line for the bad dude to say. It's a classic, yes, but it would be cool to think of something else there. My second t...
by John Doe
Fri Jul 23, 2004 8:47 pm
Forum: Off-Topic Antics
Topic: Things that tick you off
Replies: 116
Views: 6839

Things that tick you off

Originally posted by Tracker Originally posted by John Doe *Fat people who blame it on everyone but them. How about skinny people who whine about being fat? Trust me, there is nothing more annoying than some skinny person saying that they're soooo overweight and must start the starvation diet NOW! ...
by John Doe
Fri Jul 23, 2004 2:14 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Bloodmetal Candidate (Prologue-Ch.9) (New Updates- Ch. 6, 7, 8, &9)
Replies: 20
Views: 1570

The Bloodmetal Candidate (Prologue-Ch.9) (New Updates- Ch. 6, 7, 8, &9)

CHAPTER EIGHT “Away sweet darlin’, away you run; ‘cause nothing stands forever, except our love… and the gates of Jerusalem.” Rogue’s ears had long fallen numb to the melodic maelstrom that surrounded her. It was the constant attack on her mind that prevented her from thinking, from moving, from bei...
by John Doe
Thu Jul 22, 2004 8:30 pm
Forum: Off-Topic Antics
Topic: Things that tick you off
Replies: 116
Views: 6839

Things that tick you off

*When people tap you on one shoulder so you look that way, when they're really on the other side. Tons of people do it, and it's stupid, rude, and ignorant.
by John Doe
Thu Jul 22, 2004 1:37 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Bloodmetal Candidate (Prologue-Ch.9) (New Updates- Ch. 6, 7, 8, &9)
Replies: 20
Views: 1570

The Bloodmetal Candidate (Prologue-Ch.9) (New Updates- Ch. 6, 7, 8, &9)

Ack. I feel like a lazy excuse for a writer of fine fanfiction. I began writing for this story at a bad time- around the end of the year, final exams, and graduation- and discontinued work on the Bloodmetal Candidate for a while. Only tonight have I made any further progress on the story, and have o...
by John Doe
Wed Jul 21, 2004 9:09 pm
Forum: Off-Topic Antics
Topic: Things that tick you off
Replies: 116
Views: 6839

Things that tick you off

(I'm not done yet!) *People who use the school hallways to cluster their friends together, take up entire stairwells/halls to talk about some vapid topic, and act indignant when I push, shove, and bulldoze my way through them because I have a class to on the 3rd floor, and I'm in the basement. *Cens...
by John Doe
Wed Jul 21, 2004 8:55 pm
Forum: Off-Topic Antics
Topic: Things that tick you off
Replies: 116
Views: 6839

Things that tick you off

*Fat people who blame it on everyone but them. *White people who try to be black, or really anything of that sort, that's just the most common. *People who hate you because of your musical tastes, or label you for them- I'm a metal fan and a rap fan (not gangsta rap, old rap like RATM and NWA) and p...
by John Doe
Mon Jul 19, 2004 1:35 am
Forum: Off-Topic Antics
Topic: I decided to vote for Bush. Please dont hit me in the face!
Replies: 34
Views: 2722

I decided to vote for Bush. Please dont hit me in the face!

Originally posted by Winged Outlaw I respectfully disagree... I have no problem with pre-emptive war. Saddam didn't have WMDs... but he was damn sure trying to get them. So, we're s'posed to wage war with the guy who was trying to get WMDS, rather than North Korea, who's already got 'em and wants t...
by John Doe
Wed Jun 23, 2004 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Belasco's Beatrice (COMPLETELY Complete! Please Review!)
Replies: 114
Views: 10806

Belasco's Beatrice (COMPLETELY Complete! Please Review!)

Yeah, mine did much the same. This was a chapter that, while short, hit all the right notes. It's a really effective technique when you can use completely irrelevant characters and for a brief moment make them relevant. It shows the reader that this problem affects everyone around the main character...
by John Doe
Sun Jun 20, 2004 3:14 pm
Forum: Off-Topic Antics
Topic: This donut tastes like ham!
Replies: 39
Views: 2935

This donut tastes like ham!

Congrats, Drastic, for turning a ham-flavored donut into a 16-post thread. Quite a feat. There's a store in town called the Qui-K-Mart (we all call it the Quickie Mart :naughty) where everything tastes like it shouldn't. I had a Snickers that tasted like a cherry pie. Minus the cherry. Plus some ble...